A modern day tale of conflict and sin...

[~Rox Erotique~]

Hello All!!!
I thought I'd write this little ditty to cheer you up it's really quite witty!
...ok I'll stop rhyming now...
It's loosely based on my birthday, I don't quite know who's idea it was but we ended up in a strip club! (it was AWESOME!!!) the girls were HOT but one or two of them did seem quite weary of the attention we were getting and that stired a thought in the back of my mind... the following poem is based on the randomness that is my catfight addled brain!

If you like it let me know, I'm tempted to write a full story based on it!

Hope you enjoy folks!



A modern day tale of conflict and sin...
By Gemma Rox


The girls all did party as 10 the clock struck
All dressed in glamour but heads filled with muck

They drank and they laughed turning heads as they went
Nothing can stop them til last coin is spent!

"I've got an Idea!!!" Lisa did roar!
"Go to a strip club and get us some whore!!!"

"That's silly!" I giggle the beer taking hold
"I'm 29 now! I'm clearly too old!"

"NONSENSE!!! They shout, hands grab at my arms
"these girls will jump over your two buxom charms!"

The girls squeeze my breasts and giggle I do
Any harder and fear I'll moist my pants too!

"OK!" I relent our path set for sin
Lisa screams "YAY!!!" her idea did win!

Through the city of Cardiff our party did stray
To the Strip club we crash "good doormen, MAKE WAY!"

the ropes pulled aside, our party advanced
Into the dark club where shapely girls danced

The men's heads did turn as we ladies walked in
Their eye's filled with lust, their hearts set on sin

The dancers did rue, their eyes filled with malice
"who are these bitches! Who enter our palace!"

We sit and we drink and admire the sight
Not catching eye's gazing down with spite!

A girl does approach and sit at our table
"I think you should leave, while your still able!"

A rage builds inside like a tsunami swell...
Like the charge of a bull I scream "WHAT THE HELL?"

The girls look stunned, and scared say "let's go..."
But I want some answers and flatly say "NO!"

"WHO is this BITCH who dares threaten me?"
"I'M the bitch that's runs this place see!"

She stands spreading arms her girls at her side
Outnumbered and drunk I really should hide...

But beer has poured and senses are laps
I stand to face her and give her a slap!

A wicked smile does then pop on her face...
"Now I'll show you why I run this place!"

She grabs my brown hair and rips at it hard
Dragging me from my table and guard

My friends all look on, powerlessly
Outnumbered and drunk they all want to flee!

To the stage I'm dragged then met with a punch
My head rocks back hard, as fist meets face - CRUNCH!

I raise my fists, my wits rather dulled
As into a catfight I find myself lulled

My blonde attacker does launch at my waist
Her tackle lands hard and with agile grace

I slam to the floor trapped by her grasp
"I'll enjoy this!" she said in an evil rasp

Her leg raises high then comes down like thunder!
A knee to my crotch!!! My stomach does chunder!

The room does spin and my head does race
she sits on my chest pinning my arms in place!

Raining down slaps and punches she cries
"BITCH YOUR FUCKING DEAD!" her temper does rise...

A slap across cheek and a punch to the face
I gasp in quiet shock as she picks up the pace

My friends look on horrified, scared and timid
As my evil aggressor does strip me naked

The crowd all roar loud, their trousers all stiff
Baying with glee as they witness our tiff

My body is toned my breasts wonderful
But my mind is quite soft, my wits rather dull

The beer I curse! As punch landed true
If not for the drink, the fight I'd not rue

She pulls me up by my brown locks of hair
Then grips me in tight with the hug of a bear!

"FUCK!!!" I do scream!! My back in such pain!
Screaming and cursing as my energies drain

"I'll make you wish you left when you could!"
"You really shouldn't fuck with a girl from the hood!"

I gasp for sweet breath as my head it does flop
Then PAIN in my pussy! And atomic Drop!!!

"AAAAAHHH!!" I do scream my crotch now on fire
Then again she slams me! My shrieks ring out higher!

She grabs my head, I beg and I plead
Until she falls back, I get DDT'd!!!

My body falls limp out onto the ground
My head smashed the wood, and almighty pound!

She stands above me my heart it does race
Then lowers naked fanny right onto my face!!!

My legs do thrash out my arms trapped behind
Her legs so perfect, her arse so divine!

She smirks evilly as she punches my chest
She knows I'm done for, no match for her best!

ONE!!! TWO!!! THREE!!! FOUR!!!
She pounds my ribs forever more

FIVE!!! SIX!!! SEVEN!!! EIGHT!!!
Release from this hold I really can't wait!

Moving from ribs to stomach to breast
I gasp and I pant by bruised body vexed

Defenceless I lay, smothered and beat
I slowly pass out, destroyed... dead meat!

She rubs back and forth, grinding my face
Showing to all that SHE rules this place!

So there my tale ends a lesson I grieve...
If a stripper hates you then for fuck sake just leave!


x G x

[Jonica]

Brilliant!!!  Whatever they've got you on, keep taking it! 

J
xoxo

[~Rox Erotique~]

BEER!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jonica]

BEER!!!!!!!!!!!

How's the hangover?  LOL

[~Rox Erotique~]

oh my god.... that hangover was catastrophic!!!!

SUCH a great night!!!

I'm single again! lol, we went to a strip club! I drank my body weight in Beer and Long Island Ice Teas (I'm off the wine... lol) and I woke up with someone I shouldn't have...

all in all a pretty awesome birthday! YAY!!!

x G x

[Kayla]

Gosh!!! That's simply intoxicating writing! Tee hee! 

[~Rox Erotique~]

Kayla - thanks for the comments honey  allways puts a smile on my face knowing someone enjoyed my ramblings lol

Hawksmoor - you should post! that story you sent me was great! twists and turns, kept me reading till the very end!

x G x

[~Rox Erotique~]

Ricsua - LOL, that's a lovely thing to say! (but I don't think there's much of a career in writing horny ramblings from my twisted brain!)

but thanks for the compliment! I'm just glad you enjoyed it!

[howardcosell]

another one I responded to, but it didn't go through... hey, that rhymed!

I can tell you for a fact that when I read this, I wasn't feeling well... it really cheered me up, so thank you for your wonderful work. 

[MasterTom]

If a tale can be spun,
from these lines that rhyme,
I say "do it,"
when you do find time!