The Nemesis

h_k · September 14, 2020, 11:08:37 PM

Love this one. Where's Chapter 2?

LQB’s soldier-Christa The Conqueror · September 15, 2020, 07:44:45 AM

Quote from: h_k on September 14, 2020, 11:08:37 PM
Love this one. Where's Chapter 2?

God damnit

I got so excited when I saw a new comment on this post, I was hoping she had written the final chapter.

h_k · September 15, 2020, 09:28:07 AM

Quote from: Christa_The_Conqueror on September 15, 2020, 07:44:45 AM
Quote from: h_k on September 14, 2020, 11:08:37 PM
Love this one. Where's Chapter 2?

God damnit I got so excited when I saw a new comment on this post, I was hoping she had written the final chapter.

Sorry Christa, my mistake. I didn't realise that Chapter 2 was further down the page. Doh! Nor had I noticed that the thread was several pages long, so I've got lots to look forward to. Sorry to have got other people's hopes up but I'm sure there's more great stuff coming in one form or another from FC.

FyreCracka · September 15, 2020, 04:17:22 PM

Quote from: h_k on September 15, 2020, 09:28:07 AM
Quote from: Christa_The_Conqueror on September 15, 2020, 07:44:45 AM
Quote from: h_k on September 14, 2020, 11:08:37 PM
Love this one. Where's Chapter 2?

God damnit I got so excited when I saw a new comment on this post, I was hoping she had written the final chapter.

Sorry Christa, my mistake. I didn't realise that Chapter 2 was further down the page. Doh! Nor had I noticed that the thread was several pages long, so I've got lots to look forward to. Sorry to have got other people's hopes up but I'm sure there's more great stuff coming in one form or another from FC.

I'm still puttering around with chapter seven, but it is being worked on. I've at least settled in the style of fight and the age....I think.

h_k · September 15, 2020, 06:04:33 PM

Quote from: FyreCracka on September 15, 2020, 04:17:22 PM
Quote from: h_k on September 15, 2020, 09:28:07 AM
Quote from: Christa_The_Conqueror on September 15, 2020, 07:44:45 AM
Quote from: h_k on September 14, 2020, 11:08:37 PM
Love this one. Where's Chapter 2?

God damnit I got so excited when I saw a new comment on this post, I was hoping she had written the final chapter.

Sorry Christa, my mistake. I didn't realise that Chapter 2 was further down the page. Doh! Nor had I noticed that the thread was several pages long, so I've got lots to look forward to. Sorry to have got other people's hopes up but I'm sure there's more great stuff coming in one form or another from FC.

I'm still puttering around with chapter seven, but it is being worked on. I've at least settled in the style of fight and the age....I think.

Hey, you're up to 500 likes. Congratulations! You should get a badge to go with your catpin or something cute to put on the mantelpiece.

Kiva · September 16, 2020, 12:33:59 AM

This was so much fun to read again. The Sadie Hawkins party from Chapter One brings back some of my own memories.

I'm impressed by the intensity of the last two chapters. I'm wondering if Kelli and Kim will finally call it quits or if this rivalry will go on for their entire lifetimes - i.e. Chapter 20 - Battle In The Nursing Home. Lol. Thank you so much for sharing your talent!

h_k · September 16, 2020, 06:26:19 AM

Wow! Chapter 2. The fight in the freight elevator! No doubt further up this thread someone's already told you they found it uplifting so I'll have to make do with 'tremendous'. Has everything. I'll be disciplined and keep Chapter 3 for another day but both opening chapters of this series are fantastic.

Tigressel · September 16, 2020, 07:04:18 AM

Very nice stories

h_k · September 18, 2020, 06:12:16 PM

Chapter 5: Breaking Point
Tremendous chapter. Now things are getting really interesting (and complicated!).
Great writing!

h_k · September 20, 2020, 12:53:35 PM

The Nemesis
Chapter 6: Be The Storm
One of the best fights ever! I'm Team Kelli. Def!

p.s. Don't tell Jake, but I'm available 24/7 for carrying triumphant neighbourhood queens from the field of battle, and helping them out of their wet clothes and into the shower.
Have own transport. Will fly.

bobf · February 09, 2024, 03:24:57 PM

Wow. Yes! Please finish this series off if you can.

FyreCracka · February 09, 2024, 07:39:26 PM

I have recently started working on chapter 7. I couldn't figure out how I wanted to do it but I'm starting to get an idea of at least what kind of fight I want it to be- which is actually a different type of fight than what I said I had decided I was going to do last time, lol.

I still haven't figured out if it will be Kimiko or me that wins. Fortunately, because the way I'm writing it, I can make that decision towards the end.

-Kelli

Thommy1982 · October 19, 2024, 12:33:38 PM

Would love to read the next chapter

bobf · October 19, 2024, 01:19:28 PM

Me too. One of my favorite series!

The speech prof · October 20, 2024, 12:35:56 AM

Quote from: FyreCracka on February 09, 2024, 07:39:26 PM
I have recently started working on chapter 7. I couldn't figure out how I wanted to do it but I'm starting to get an idea of at least what kind of fight I want it to be- which is actually a different type of fight than what I said I had decided I was going to do last time, lol.

I still haven't figured out if it will be Kimiko or me that wins. Fortunately, because the way I'm writing it, I can make that decision towards the end.

-Kelli

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