The fight for Paul

[JT Edson]

This is a great scenario and set of fights. I can hardly wait for the next part. Great story writing.

[justlooking9000]

This is a great scenario and set of fights. I can hardly wait for the next part. Great story writing.

Sorry to disappoint, but I think I'm pretty much done with Drury and Lisa for the foreseeable future. After this wild and long contest, I can't think of how I could keep milking these girls without sounding repetitive. I mean, sure I could imagine a new scenario where the girls go toe to toe again over Paul. I've found scenario building my forte, but as far as the fighting is involved, I usually struggle on those parts and I fear that the catfight part would sound a little too much like what I've already written for this story.

The open ended nature of the ending was a consolation prize for those rooting for a blonde win. The groundswell of support for Drury surprised me, because when a blonde and a brunette go toe to toe, the forum usually cheers for the brunette. Deciding who would keep Paul was hard, because I felt sympathetic to Lisa in the story Mr Coleman wrote. I think she should have won. However, after reading a bunch of stories where the brunette came on top as I was writing this, I got fed up with the "brunettes always win" BS and had a version of the story where Drury won and stole Paul away from Lisa. What really tipped the scales towards Lisa was finding another story where Drury won. So I decided in the end that in the Lisa vs Drury stories, Lisa deserved at least one story where she actually kept Paul to herself.

As a further consolation for those rooting for Drury I'll point the following:

-Drury has incessantly pursued Paul for months and was willing to fight three punishing matches over him. You think such a girl would just meekly accept she lost like a good loser? No, Drury seems to me a jealous, sore loser that would *love* to engineer a rematch despite what she had agreed with Lisa.

-Lisa might have won, but that was by the skin of her teeth. A fact that hasn't been lost to Drury. The blonde bombshell probably will think that Lisa was just lucky, and that another catfight would prove she was the better woman and win her Paul.

-Drury could easily spark a rematch if she simply refuses to stop contacting Paul. Lisa will obviously have to fight to keep her man from the blonde man stealer.

-In this era of facebook and instant messaging, it's hard to imagine Drury suddenly losing all contact with Paul. Sure, Lisa might force Paul to block Drury from facebook or from whatsapp, but we all know that it's not hard to keep tabs on another person nowadays, if you want to. If not an immediate rematch, I imagine Drury watching like a huntress, waiting for a moment of weakness in Paul's relationship with Lisa to pounce on a very willing Paul and claim him as hers. And if Lisa wants to recover him, she'd have to fight tooth and nail over her boyfriend.

-Life happens. While Lisa and Paul might tight, it might be that Lisa goes away to pursue further studies or Paul moves to pursue another job. Drury would certainly take the chance of hooking up with Paul if Lisa is not physically present for a long time. Should Lisa come back, she'd be frustrated to see her love rival with her boyfriend. There's no doubt another catfight would ensue. For Lisa, so she can restart her relationship with Paul and for Drury, because she'll think the brunette has a lot of nerve to move away and suddenly come back and try to steal Paul from her.

-Even if we assume Drury will be fine and dandy with the man she wanted fucking her sexual rival, it's hard to see Lisa drop the matter completely. The brunette beauty is temperamental, likes to show off herself, haughty and arrogant. It's conceivable that even after humiliating Drury, Lisa would want to take tons of pictures and post them on instagram or something, knowing Drury would be watching. There might be a point in which Drury has enough of the brunette cow tits flaunting her relationship with Paul and decide to have a go at paul again.

-After seeing Paul's reaction to the whole affair, Lisa might conclude that should their relationship hit a low, she could just play the Drury card and challenge the blonde again to re lit the fire with Paul. The haughty Lisa would of course think she should eventually win such fight, but maybe she's overconfident.

[DogWithABone]

For anyone wondering, Lisa is 5'4.5" 125 and Drury is 5'1.5" 115.

[Dougie]

I was pulling for Drury but that don't take away from the story it was GREAT thank you most entertaining.

[justlooking9000]

Write a sequel without fighting, then.  Just tension and drama.

Well, the problem is that after building up the tension I'd need to write about how the girls solve the sexual tension. And it's hard for me to see how the "solution" is not another long and savage catfight over Paul. There could be "threesome" where the winner is the girl that makes Paul cum first in a competitive yet not violent contest, but I feel that the losing girl would just turn the whole thing into another catfight.

For instance, menage a trois was a very nice story ( I *LOVE* it), but in the end the mistress kind of overwhelms the wife with force to solve the issue, and the only reason it doesn't turn into a catfight is because the wife agrees to share the husband with the mistress.  


For those (very) vocal Drury supporters, there's a little surprise in your inbox. But officially, the brunette keeps her boyfriend.

[Duke]

I spend long time to read your all story.... because I'm unskilled at English........

But your novel accorded my preference, And I read that so interesting!!

Thank you for your artwork, and I'm looking forward to your next story too,   Good night



P.S
I love your photo, like example Drury and Lisa
but I can't find the picture of Michiko vs Chiharu, and Amy vs MY.....
Could you please repost there Photograph?

[JT Edson]

Write a sequel without fighting, then.  Just tension and drama.

Well, the problem is that after building up the tension I'd need to write about how the girls solve the sexual tension. And it's hard for me to see how the "solution" is not another long and savage catfight over Paul. There could be "threesome" where the winner is the girl that makes Paul cum first in a competitive yet not violent contest, but I feel that the losing girl would just turn the whole thing into another catfight.

For instance, menage a trois was a very nice story ( I *LOVE* it), but in the end the mistress kind of overwhelms the wife with force to solve the issue, and the only reason it doesn't turn into a catfight is because the wife agrees to share the husband with the mistress.  


For those (very) vocal Drury supporters, there's a little surprise in your inbox. But officially, the brunette keeps her boyfriend.

You already know I love your stories and your writing style. Something I did to a couple of stories to spice them up:

- A blowjob competition where the girls took one minute turns to see who could get the man off first. As the man got closer and closer to cumming at the end of each minute the girls got more desperate and more aggressive with each other to the point the girls broke out into a catfight rather than loose the competition.

- In another story I had the girls each start at one of the man's feet and slowly lick, kiss, such on him, caressed their pussies on him as they went up as well as use their nails and fingers lightly on his body working their way up his body ( I actually had this happen to me once, the sexual tension was INCREDIBLE for me) and then back down. When they got to his cock and balls again they started competing over who would claim them and that broke out into a catfight.

Just a couple of things I have used in the past, if you are interested.

Again, love your work.

[justlooking9000]

Duke: Sure. Please send me your email address by PM and I'll be happy to send the pictures I have. Regrettably, I seem to have lost the pictures for Chiharu and Michiko.

JT Edson: Input much appreciated. I was wondering which stories you're talking about. I'm pretty sure one of them is Mr Mckenzie's students but not sure about the other one.

[JT Edson]

The other one was "Clean". Although, I might need to see if I put up the complete version on the FCF.

[JT Edson]

Justlooking has to be one of my favorite authors on this board. My gosh, that was such an incredible story. I have to go back thru and re-read it (and his Korean Ex girlfriend series as well. I haven't read the last one. ).

Thank you for sharing your incredible talent with the res  of us.

[Wondering48]

Finally had time to sit down and read your story. It is an absolutely great story and now I have make time to read your other stories on the Revenge of the Korean Girlfriend.
Love your work and adding you to my must read listing. Thanks for the effort.

[Crimsonrash]

I loved this story. I lost the full series, along with the Drury ultimately winning alternate ending. Does anyone happen to have it still?

[martha]

really beautiful story, you're the best

[justlooking9000]

I loved this story. I lost the full series, along with the Drury ultimately winning alternate ending. Does anyone happen to have it still?

Hi! I'm happy people are still reading this story 8 year after I originally wrote it.

For some reason, I feel this proved to be my most popular work. It's fascinating to re-read it after 8 years, and I wonder how would the story turned out if I rewrote it now. However, I believe this will prove impossible for now. My schedule nowadays simply doesn't give the time needed to write stories.


Without any more ado, the alternative ending.


The fight for Paul Drury wins ending.


Changes come after the line break.



Drury's worst fear came to past as Lisa bucked once again and overturned the pin. The girls rolled around the grass for a brief period, but it was Lisa that managed to stay on top this time. The blonde frantically bucked and squirmed, knowing defeat would mean losing Paul. She struggled mightily, several times almost throwing the brunette seductress off, but the longer Lisa stayed on top, the more and more subdued Drury's squirming became, until her body simply refused to move anymore. The brunette completed the deed by banging Drury's head against the grass a few times to make sure the obstinate blonde wouldn't rise again.   

Lisa then fell to the side, rolling on the grass until her head rested on Drury's massive jugs.

-"It's time to claim what is mine"-panted Lisa as she spread her legs open for Paul.  The man in dispute walked towards his girlfriend and kissed her as he laid on top of her in a missionary position and started pounding really hard. Lisa, her head now resting Drury's massive tits, just moaned louder and louder as Paul came closer to cumming. Her cxnt felt slightly painful, but she remedied the situation by scratching the blonde's ass every time Paul sank too deep, leaving the fair skinned girl with another horrible set of scars to remember her by.     


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The pain on her shapely ass and Paul's vigorous pumping kept Drury awake despite her tiredness. She was physically so close to the man she wanted that she could feel his breathing, and yet so far, him drilling Lisa's cxnt. The blonde had always fought for what she wanted, and she wanted Paul's cock inside her. Liberating her left arm from under Lisa's body, she put it over the brunette's neck, choking her. Lisa's surprised squeal alerted Paul to the fact that the obstinate blonde beauty had not considered herself defeated yet. He slid his shaft out of his girlfriend's throbbing pussy to let Lisa fight on equal terms with Drury.

Lisa raged and scratched Drury's arm, incredulous that the blonde seductress she had so throughoutly battered could still fight back. When that didn't work and she found it increasingly hard to breathe, her arms blindly searched for Drury's face and almost succeeded in thumping her thumbs into Drury's eyes. Shocked at the attempted eye gouging, Drury gave up the neck lock and moved away, quickly getting up on her knees and lurching at Paul's girlfriend.

Not worried about breathing now, the sultry brunette also went to her knees and turned around to see that Drury was charging at her. Feeling the blonde's bruised rack crashing against hers, Lisa's hand went downwards looking to destroy the pussy her boyfriend's cock had frequently drilled into in the recent months. Knowing where this was going, Drury quickly imitated her rival in love.

-"PAUL WILL *ouch* NEVER BE YOU...ARGH"-tried to say Lisa as she felt Drury's violating the hole only meant for Paul's dick.

-"I'LL LEAVE *moan* cxntLES...OUCH"-Drury's eyes cried, feeling Lisa's hand trespassing her pussy for a third time in the fight. Taking a desperate gamble, she sneaked her left arm downwards and opened the brunette's labia, while the right arm found the taller girl's clit and pressed it against her fingers.

-"ARGGGHHHHHH"-screamed Lisa as the pain became intolerable. She fell backwards, curling in a fetal position as her hands tried to comfort her cxnt. Drury quickly put her arms around Lisa's leg and head, using a wrestling pin to immobilize the haughty brunette.

-"CUM INSIDE ME!"-panted Drury. Paul knew what to do, coming from behind the woman who had spent months trying to steal him away from Lisa and doing his business doggy style. It was now the spent Lisa feeling Paul's violently pumping her sexual rival as she tried to break the Drury's hold, but her scratches and bucking were too weak to make a dent on Drury's pin. In the meantime, Drury was repeatedly elbowing Lisa's face to break her already weaning resistance.

-"I'm coming!"-warned Paul just seconds before unloading his seed into the welcoming blonde bombshell. Drury felt him bursting inside her pussy, his cock pulsating inside her cxnt as his chest falling on her back her. Drury, still maintaining her pin, grabbed Lisa by the hair and banged her defeated love rival's head against the grass.

-"You're mine"-panted Drury, standing up and licking any remaining white liquid off Paul's cock. She then proceeded to mount the defeated Lisa and making sure the sultry brunette couldn't fight back, she sat on Lisa's sweaty face.

-"Nooo!"-whimpered the sexy Lisa as she felt Drury's cxnt rubbing against her face, Paul's sum slowly streaming out of the blonde's pussy and into her face. She tried to dismount the triumphant blonde but her efforts were too little too late. She was at the mercy of the man stealer.

-"What happened to your threats cow tits? Weren't you going to rip my tit's off?-taunted Drury, making a point of bending backwards for a moment to claw Lisa's mammaries some more.-"This is the last time you'll enjoy the taste of Paul's cum"
After tiring of gloating, Drury changed to schoolgirl pin, pressing Lisa's arms firmly under her knees and started etching
"PAUL" on her opponent's huge right orb.

Having completed her grim work, she groggily stood up, hugging and then kissing Paul for a long time. She really had won. Paul was hers. She would no longer have to share his cock. She had proven to Paul she was the better woman, the only one deserving of his cum. 

As Drury's euphoria energized her, Paul could not her but to look at the whimpering Lisa in all her defeated nakedness as he left the beach house with the blonde victress. Even in defeat the brunette looked marvelous.  He wondered if Lisa would really accept her defeat. She was the kind of woman who had a pathological need to win no matter what and who would not tolerate a challenge to her relationship. Paul knew the haughty brunette could not stand the thought of being second best in any contest. In the back of his mind, he both feared and hoped this was not going to be the last time he saw Lisa.

END

[bobf]

Rematch?