Fight Club

[Bri]

Great story...was like i was sitting right there on the boat.

[Bri]

Hey Randy,

Great story.  Loved the buildup and the fight was exciting.  You can put me in your story anytime.   

[Teen Catter]

Great story...keep them coming.  Hoping for a sequel soon.

[RandyTheRef]

Really appreciate all of the kind words as well as the constructive criticism. I honestly never expected this kind of response for my first story.
I'm doing a rough draft of the sequel now. What I'm wondering is where would you like to see the story pick up at? On the mats following Jennifer's pin, or later on?

[Bri]

Hmmmm...could continue the fight.  Turn it into a multi-fall match if the high rollers on the boat wanna see more.  Could get quite interesting....

[Teen Catter]

How's the sequel coming?   Can't wait to read it.  If you need some inspiration, let me know.   

[CaseyWrestles]

You are keeping us in suspense!

[FyreCracka]

Great story...well written and a good read. Can't wait for the sequel.

[Mikoso]

Wow,this is great!!!More! 

[Rossi]

A great story. Was well written and match was well paced. I would have liked a little more build up in tension between Amanda and Jennifer but loved reaction of those watching as well as Jennifer taunting her opponent through out the match. Though mostly one sided never felt Amanda was out of fight.

[LiLMrs_]

Great story! Would like to see a rematch maybe even different style and setting but really enjoyed reading it, and look forward to more of your stories and the adventures of Amanda.

[fomanix]

very awesome... love the characters and development... cant wait to read more

[Aleena]

I'll echo all the kudos from everyone else who commented.  This has the potential to be a great series like "The Society" stories seen on these pages.  I would love to see Amanda in a couple more fights where she hones her cat fighting skills - maybe even fighting her friend who introduced her to the group.  Then after some hard fought victories she has a much anticipated rematch with Jennifer.

But again....well done!

[snw]

 Very nice story. As a fan of these type one sided matches especially in front of husband/bf it is great. I would like to see you pick it up from the pin and have Jennifer continue to taunt and continue with the over powering strength moves. Also engage Amanda's husband while taunting Amanda and asking him about how weak his wife is and play up to him to humiliate Amanda more. Cant wait to hear more very nice!

[wrestlingcouplenyc]

great story - easily one of my favorites from the forums!