One Style to Another = Betrayed/Disappointed?

Started by Rivals Rapture, February 28, 2019, 10:05:17 PM

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Rivals Rapture

Let's say that you're reading a story that is one type of fight (IE catfight, sexfight, titfight), and then somewhere in the tale it organically switches to another style, how does it make you feel? Betrayed? Annoyed? Indifferent? Excited?

For this, I am asking that you assume the transition is well done and feels natural.

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catfightlover40

Knowing you? Excited, and you can quote me on that ;)
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Maizenblue

Think if it is done gradually then wouldn't mind it.

AlexisStreetFighter

Depends on the styles. If you have set me up for a realistic brawl in a public setting, then you transition it into a sexfight, that would annoy me and I would hate it. However, if you set me up for a stylised private match that transitions into a sexfight, or a private sexfight that transitions into a real fight, that I could be interested in (especially if, as you say, it's done well and feels natural to the story).