my first post

Started by maifights, May 29, 2011, 10:12:54 PM

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maifights

May 29, 2011, 10:12:54 PM
Thanks for looking.
Let me know what you think.

luffy316

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May 30, 2011, 02:14:00 AM
a good scene but the mouths look odd
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maifights

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May 30, 2011, 02:56:18 AM
well this is halfway through the story.  They've got black eyes and bloody swollen lips.  I guess it would make more sense in context. thanks for the comment though!
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