My first story attempt - be kind ;)
That was a good enjoyable fight. I liked how vicious it was and the relative private nature of it. Is it fantasy or based on RL?
Fantastic writing. I'm not a fan of that much blood and brutality, but it was really easy to get into the conflict and pick a character to root for.
Very nice!
Terrific writing. Congrats.
please don't stop at this! ;D what a great story
Quote from: IrinaSF on March 10, 2023, 02:39:36 PM
My first story attempt - be kind ;)
Am i the only one who doesnt see story?